A small excerpt from ESTELAN......quite early in the novel.
Crossing through the
wooden gate, Pallia noted blooming lilac bushes trimming the pathway to the
tidy, white laurelwood home. Halfway up
the walk, Pallia paused, forcing herself to hyperventilate and projecting panic
in all directions. She banged on the
heavy door until it gave way suddenly enough that she fell inward. A pair of strong, rough hands caught her, lifted
her as easily as if she’d been a small babe, and carried her into the house. Overwhelmed by pain and exhaustion, Pallia
lost consciousness.
Great description. Why is she forcing herself to hyperventilate? What or who is in seemingly innocent house? Fun snippet.
ReplyDeleteDefinitely has me intrigued.
ReplyDeleteInteresting snippet! Why is she faking? Or is she? I'd read on!
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