Everytime I pick up my manuscript and read it, I find sentences that could be improved, passages that need to be cut or expanded, any number of changes that make me feel better about it. I do not believe it is ever going to end, I wonder if I will ever be truly satisfied with what I have. Eh, well, I will keep working on it because I believe in it and enjoy the world I am working with.
I am in need of more feedback though, some honest (constructive!) feedback. It is harder to come by than I ever imagined. I am working on it however, and hope that eventually I will get some responses from within the industry. We shall see!